“Look at this beautiful arcade and those magnificent paintings, Mother. It’s so calm and tranquil here. You can spend your evenings in the rose garden. You are going to love it here.”
Marie seethed with rage as she was wheeled through the blanch catacomb that led to her tomb. Tomb…room…what did it matter, a sarcophagus by any other name. Retired from the board of directors, retired from her life, now stuck in the gardens to wilt away with the roses.
Aaah, but this rose had one last thorn. One last move to wipe that condescending smirk right off her daughter’s face.
When she was six feet under and her will was opened, what a shock they was going to get!
Thanks to Rochelle at Friday Fictioneers for hosting and to Dale Rogerson for the photo prompt. If you’d like to participate, visit here.
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Ouch, should’ve been a better daughter I guess. Nice take.
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I dunno. Mummy’s pretty scheming too. Chip of the old block?
Thanks for liking it.
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Dear Leaking Ink,
I’d love be present for the reading of that will. Good one. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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PS The print against the gray background is next to impossible to read.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I just realised. I’m going to have to figure out how to change that. Been resisting playing around with templates thus far.
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Thank you for hosting. I enjoyed reading the various takes. It’s amazing how the same picture can spawn off so many diverse thoughts.
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Hmmm… not a good sign. One does not like to be “discarded”… but, as you said to Iain, maybe she deserved it…
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🙂
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You did a good job portraying a bitter old woman with a vicious plan for revenge. No love lost here, one gathers.
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Yup. Thank God it’s just fiction.
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Well narrated
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Thanks
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Ha, glad the rose had once last thorn. Well done.
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Thank you
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