“I’ll take it,” she announced, walking on with a nonchalance that belied the fact that she was about to spend almost the GDP of a small country.
She did not understand art. She did not really care. All she knew was that this was the place to buy, and anything that had such an outrageous tag on it would make for great conversation.
That particular piece was going in his study. Being a man of simple minimalistic taste he would hate it. But she didn’t care. He would simply shut up and endure. He always did.
According to her psychologist she was pushing him to a breaking point because subconsciously she felt unworthy of him. Whatever. It wasn’t as if that woman came cheap either.
“I’m sorry madam,” interrupted the cashier, “it appears that all your cards have been cancelled.”
In response to the 130th challenge of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers based on a photo by Jade M Wong.
The story has deep insights, but ends on a different note. Superb writing!
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Thank you. High praise coming from you.
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Oh, he had the last laugh on her there! Great story.
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Even the most patient of people have their limits.
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Uh Oh! Sounds like her husband is on to her. LOL! Great story!
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Thank you
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Thank heavens he stopped her cards. Loved the story
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Thank you so much.
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Ha! Revenge is sweet. 😀
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She had it coming!
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This is great writing. The characters have been built beautifully. Really enjoyed reading this.
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So glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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She felt unworthy of him. ….. and she was trying to prove her worth by paying an astronomical amount for the art. Good she couldn’t buy it.
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She lost a lot more than that unfortunately.
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The last line adds such a twist that it takes it to an altogether different level
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Glad you appreciated the twist.
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She’s definitely brought that in herself! A great insight into their relationship. Very nicely done. 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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