I’m frozen outside the closed door. Oh Mateo, what have you done!
Roof running! What on God’s merciful earth was that? When he left home this morning he said he was going for a run, trying to explain something called free running to me. Mateo, don’t be up to no good, I warned him, and he insisted that it was a legitimate sport.
That’s Mateo, always out to live life. He cant resist a challenge, or a dare, even if gets him into trouble. I doubt any other mother has been called to the principal’s office as much as I.
Just last month he had been suspended for an entire week for holding some senior’s weed in his locker. Why Mateo, I ask him, and he says it’s so his friend’s college applications don’t get affected. Doesn’t a good heart count for anything, he asks me. He’s a good boy my Mateo, but he drives me crazy.
I warned him, last time Mateo, I get called by the principal one more time and you are in serious trouble.
One month later I’m standing outside another cold white door. Only this time the words on the door read ‘Mortuary’.
In response to the 123rd Challenge of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers based on a photo prompt by Grant-Sud.
Great tale. Heartbreaking.
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Loss of a child always is. Thank you for reading.
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Such a sad ending! Poor Mateo. His goodness caused his own demise. Great story!
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Thank you
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I keep seeing these videos of free running and waiting for someone to fall. I wonder what the statistics are for injuries and deaths. A sad take, well written.
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Ya. I’ve always found it rather risky. Thank you for reading.
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Adrenalin addiction is being promoted by the media. We have those motor cycle stunt drivers – Every week there are unnecessary deaths and injuries. A great take.
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Thank you so much.
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Poor guy. And I totally don’t approve of these free running and parkour stunts. But that might be because of my own fear of heights. A well woven tale, this one is. Mateo was a good person. Cheers, Varad
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Thank you
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Very sad 😦
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What a sad ending. I can only hope that it was a result of mateo’s good heart.
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Unfortunately a lot of good kids end up inadvertently hurting themselves.
Thank you for stopping by.
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Oh no!
And I love the name Mateo.
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Ya. I do too. I wanted a nice name for my happy kid.
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